This became clear to me in our episode on the Israeli- Palestinian con ict

This became clear to me in our episode on the Israeli- Palestinian con ict, one that was certain to in ame both sides of the hyphen. After careful editing, I was reasonably sure that we had done a good job of not offending anybody, or at least offending everybody equally, and not coming off as either pro-Israeli or pro-Palestinian. But when I watched the video I had
a nagging sense that by mentioning the casualties suffered by Palestinians in the second clause, after describing those suffered by Israelis, we had somehow given more weight to the Palestinians’ cause. This was not at all intended, and it’s something
to watch out for when you write.